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PART FOUR
Third Draft.
PAGE ONE
(five panels)
ONE
Freddy and Garlan* are standing by the passage.
There s
basically no water around now.
GARLAN*
I m going first.
I m not crawling
behind you.
Last thing I wanna
see now.
FREDDY
Garlan.
I feel...
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DIVIDED
PART FOUR
Third Draft.
PAGE ONE
(five panels)
ONE
Freddy and Garlan* are standing by the passage.
There s
basically no water around now.
GARLAN*
I m going first.
I m not crawling
behind you.
Last thing I wanna
see now.
FREDDY
Garlan.
I feel like I should
apologize for snapping at you
for the pumps before.
GARLAN*
Don t worry about it.
TWO
Garlan* takes a closer exam at the passage, but Freddy still
looks at him.
FREDDY
You and Kylie say that, but you
don t mean it.
GARLAN*
Look.
People usually respect
me, but since you re Freddy, you
can just walk over me.
THREE
Closing in on Garlan*.
GARLAN*
Usually, I m OK with that, you
know this job better then I, but.
.
.
GARLAN*
When you do in front of citizens,
that respect is diminished.
FOUR
Freddy places his hand on Garlans* shoulder.
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